Just some suggestions:
- keep the maps small, enlarging them this way just distorts the picture, and makes it less clear. also hurts my eyes XD
-if its a really good team, they would not need delay clock. also, you might want to mention that pestle and potatoes are not both "required" and that they are for sapping sp. thus if you have enough potatoes, you dont need pestle, and if you have enough pestlers, you have no need for a potato. not saying you cant use both.
-for the rewards, its sword OR wand, not both.
-the weapon is given at end of dragon fight, no need to complete entire.
-the last fight gives the skill
-in fight with generals, bck has no respawns, front has one.
-the last fight is not "way easier", it just seems that way since you just finished dragon fight, and usually people do that right after. yes, it is easier, but thats no reason o let your guard down.

theres probably more that could be added, but thats about all ill type for now @.@

edit: ah and also, dont forget to mention the 2 hour time limit on the dragon fight and i think last fight also has. if you do not beat within the time limit, you would need to redo it, hence why the guide maker pointed out a delay clock.