| Sun, 19 Jul 2009, 3:59am | #1 |
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(Chapter 1: Re-Edited version)
(Chapter 2)
Last edited Sun, 19 Jul 2009, 8:37am by JelandaProfile
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| Sun, 19 Jul 2009, 6:03am | #2 |
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not bad. But you might want to look over it for grammar once. Looking forward to reading a bit more. Scorpio 2
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| Sun, 19 Jul 2009, 6:16am | #3 |
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thank yah ^^ sorry for wrong grammars
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| Sun, 19 Jul 2009, 1:34pm | #4 |
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it is cute! i think i will always look at this page ^^ i will download it allh
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| Sun, 19 Jul 2009, 5:54pm | #5 |
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Why did you put a download link, and not one for the page where you posted the story?Sometimes these types of downloads won't work. |
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| Sun, 19 Jul 2009, 10:12pm | #6 |
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ahm sorry^^ ill try to make it better^^ thanks for commenting *EDIT*
Edited by Sarin:
Last edited Wed, 17 Feb 2010, 6:38pm by Sarin
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| Sat, 20 Feb 2010, 7:48am | #7 |
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